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1 Li-en's Character on Fri May 04, 2012 4:45 am

Li-en

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Name: Li-en
Nickname/Aliases: Li
Age: 13
Physical Age: 13
Gender: Female
Birthplace: Village of the High Trees
Previous Residence: Village Hidden in a Waterfall
Clan:

||Appearance|



General Appearance: Li-en has long, silky, black hair. She wears a light blue vest and under it a black top. She is also wearing a light blue pair of long ninja pants. She also has a pouch belt around her waist. Inside that belt contains her blade fans, herbs, and ninja stars.

Her ninja belt is on her forehead. She wears black gloves, the only thing her parents left her with. Li-en wears black sandles. They were made for tree bark and an anciet metal. Her socks are white made out of silk and wool.

    Height: 5'3
    Weight: 99 lbs
    Eye Color: Brown
    Hair Color & Style: Black, and long hair

Gallery:
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||Rank Information|


Letter Rank: D
Ninja Rank: Genin


||Personality|


Overall Personality:
Li-en is a sleeper, but that doesn't mean she lazy. She sleeps because when she does she stores her power for an ultimate attack. Li-en is a person that likes to do things by herself. She never wants help from others. She can be a very indepent person.

Li-en can also be a little aggressive at times when she gets something wrong. Li-en can also be a sneaky person. Since she is a ninja and all, of course she's sneaky, but that not the only reason why.

Li-en is a ninja that likes to sneak up on people to figure there specialities. This is one of the reasons why she sleeps at random times. She sleeps to get to know them, to see what they'll do next. Li-en also is a little battle hungry. If she wants to see if anyone js an enemy she'll fight them and find their fighting style and weak point.

    Favorite Quote/Saying: "The gloves are coming off this round."
    Hobby: Sleeping
    Favorite Color: Blue
    Fears: Her fears are foxes.
    Goals: Her goal is to be the next Hokage.


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Elemental Affinity
    Dominant: Wind
    Recessive:



Skill Specialty
    Dominant: Ninjutsu
    Recessive: Weaponry


Special Characteristics:
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Traits:
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||History|



Family:She has no family.Her family abandon her after the spirit tiger was destroying her village.
History:
[spoiler]When the spirit tiger(Tiger spirit is a white glowing tiger and is like the same creature as the nine tails fox excepted its not a nine tail beast.) came and attacked the Village of the High Trees, Li-en's parents left her to die.Little did they know she live and the same tiger trained her and treated her like his own (the tiger thought it was a it's cub). She fought through a lot of hard work to get to the nearest village school.The tiger was soon killed, by a traveling ninja and Li-en trained harder so she can avenge her friend's death. She had tracked the ninja all the way to the Village Hidden in the waterfall and has live their ever since.

As a little girl the tiger taught her the way of the tiger. She learned to sneak on people to find if they were the enemy or friend. Li-en was taught how to climb and culture. Even when the tiger was trying to destory her city the tiger was only looking for someone to learn it ways. When he found Li-en it was a gift and a curse.

When the the tiger died, it went into Li-en body.Every night Li-en turn into the beast going into a rampage aand destory towns after town. She never knew what happen to her. The mystery is still their for it's only at night her full power wakens. spoiler]
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RP example:The wind was roaring. A ninja girl was sleeping in a tree. Her name is Li-en from the Village of the High Trees. She always stood out with the others, the only way she can be her self is with the trees. She can be what you call lazy at sometimes, but don't judge a book by it's color. She can be dangerous, when she needs to.



Last edited by Li-en on Sat May 05, 2012 3:36 pm; edited 8 times in total

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2 Re: Li-en's Character on Fri May 04, 2012 4:50 am

Thalia

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you put "gold" instead of "goal" hehe lol Razz

what you put under traits, you should put in a paragraph under her personality Smile looks great so far! I like her pic x3

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3 Re: Li-en's Character on Fri May 04, 2012 4:52 am

Li-en

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thank you

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4 Re: Li-en's Character on Fri May 04, 2012 4:57 am

Thalia

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i see some small problems at the moment (i know you aren't done yet) do you want me to go ahead and fix them to show you?

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5 Re: Li-en's Character on Fri May 04, 2012 4:58 am

Li-en

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please do.

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6 Re: Li-en's Character on Fri May 04, 2012 5:05 am

Thalia

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there we go Smile i helped by editing some of it ^.^ i moved the thing you had in traits to her personality (Which still needs 2 paragraphs) her appearance needs 2 paragraphs, and you need 3 paragraphs in her history Smile

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7 Re: Li-en's Character on Fri May 04, 2012 5:12 am

Li-en

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thank you

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8 Re: Li-en's Character on Fri May 04, 2012 1:08 pm

Thalia

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no problem ^^ now you just need to have two paragraphs for personality and two paragraphs for appearance and 3 paragraphs for history

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9 Re: Li-en's Character on Sat May 05, 2012 3:03 pm

Thalia

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She sleeps to get to know them, to see what they'll do next

what do you mean by that line? :3
and the line you put in her traits should be put in her personality
and can you explain to me what this Spirit Tiger is?

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10 Re: Li-en's Character on Sat May 05, 2012 3:08 pm

Li-en

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The lines means that she sleeps to regain her thoughts about the person she was observing.

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11 Re: Li-en's Character on Sat May 05, 2012 3:10 pm

Thalia

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i see.. x3 can you move the line you put in traits to her personality? :3

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12 Re: Li-en's Character on Sat May 05, 2012 3:13 pm

Li-en

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I can't really. I am using my phone for the computer stop working.

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13 Re: Li-en's Character on Sat May 05, 2012 3:20 pm

Thalia

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kk i can fix it for you then x3

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14 Re: Li-en's Character on Sat May 05, 2012 3:23 pm

Li-en

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Please do.

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15 Re: Li-en's Character on Sat May 05, 2012 3:31 pm

Thalia

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you said the spirit tiger is the same creature as the nine tails fox..

it can be like it Smile but it cant be the same as the ninetails fox x3 the ninetails fox is one of the tailed beast monsters, but it can be a like creature Smile

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16 Re: Li-en's Character on Sat May 05, 2012 3:38 pm

Thalia

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it should be good now ^.^ although im not sure im familiar with the villages shes been in.. but thats okay Razz

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17 Re: Li-en's Character on Sat May 05, 2012 4:37 pm

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Thank you.

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18 Re: Li-en's Character on Mon May 07, 2012 10:51 am

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Alright, well Li-en looks like she has the potential to be a great character, however before she can be accepted there are a few details I would like to go over.
Under general appearence you need to have two paragraphs each roughly 150 words.
What does your character look like? Is he/she ugly, handsome, muscular, thin, fat, ect. There are limitless variations you could choose. A picture is acceptable, but regardless there needs to be two paragraphs detailing a little more about their appearance.
Requirement: +2 Paragraphs [150 words each]
I personally use one paragraph to describe the character's physical traits and one to describe what they wear.
You also left out the Height, Weight, Eye Color, Hair Color & Style section.
So for your personality section you need at least two paragraphs (check, this is done ^_^ ) but again these paragraphs need to be roughly 150 words each.
How does your character act? Is he/she friendly, cold-hearted, two-faced, optimistic, ect. Describe your fighting style too. This needs to be at least two paragraphs. You do not need to have a full specific fighting style written. Just give us a general idea of how your character would react in a fight and how he/she would respond to attacks.
Requirement: +2 Paragraphs[150 words each]
Personally I use the first to describe their personality (what are they like when happy, sad, do they get excited easily, what are other's general opinions on them? ect.) then I'll use the second paragraph to briefly describe their fighting style (Do they use taijutsu a lot, do they work best alone, in pairs, or large groups ect.)
I also noticed that you didn't add any SCs. If you would like you can have your character have three as a genin. You can find out more info and a list here.
You have the three paragraphs needed for the genin history, however the last two don't really have enough words. Beef it up a bit. Go into more details, perhaps even give specific memories (That's a good way to buff up your word count) ^_^

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